Spring Exampler Marking

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Candiate A
They full under band 4
WWW- They have analysed the text well with loads of description and loads of knowledge from the text that has been provided. Used appropriate Terminology where needed.
WWW- They have talked not only about the main image they have got point from the whole texts. For example the background image of the helicopter and train. they have talked about it in details.
WWW-They have disscussed different aspects of the main image, such as the colour of the suit and what it represents. Another one is the title of the main image or the directors or actors provided on it.
EBI- They need to analyse the the background of the Text in more details, such as the colours and the use of those colours
EBI- They need to use more Media Language theories in order to get the higher mark.
EBI- They can analyse the smaller images in more complex details

Candiate B
They full Under Band 5
WWW-They have analysed the text with clear terminology and great use of Media Language. Furthermore, they talked about the images at the back with great understanding
WWW-They have analysed the text using media theories and supported that with the images provided on the text
WWW- They have used loads of undesrtanding  of the theories and they have disscused the meaning behind the text
EBI-They can talk less bout the images in the background and can focus on the main character more rather then other characters much more
EBI-They can also discuss the meaning of the helicopter and train rather then always talking about the woman in the text
EBI- They can talk about the characteristics of the main character and how is he important to the movie rather than always disscusing the images around the main image.

Candiate C
They full under band 3
WWW- They have analysed the text to an extend with minimum terminology used. they have used understanding of the elements in the text.
WWW- They have used a minimun understanding of theories to describe the meaning created behind the text.
WWW- They have analysed the text with some understanding behind the images
EBI- They can discuss the text in more complex details and understanding. They can use different. media terminology for different sections they talk about.
EBI-They can talk about the main character in more details and analyse the text it self in more descriptive understanding.
EBI- They can use more theories to discuss their meaning in the text.

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